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濰坊托福是濰坊托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校的重點(diǎn)專業(yè)，濰坊市知名的托福培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)，教育培訓(xùn)知名品牌，濰坊托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校師資力量雄厚，全國(guó)各大城市均設(shè)有分校，學(xué)校歡迎你的加入。

濰坊托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布濰坊市濰城區(qū),寒亭區(qū),坊子區(qū),奎文區(qū),青州市,諸城市,壽光市,安丘市,高密市,昌邑市,臨朐縣,昌樂縣等地,是濰坊市極具影響力的托福培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。

Adapted from Sara Lawrence-Lightfoot, I've Known Rivers: Lives of Loss and Liberation

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Lesson 33

Text A

We Are Not Deaf !

Jane and Lise have had lunch with Uncle David and Aunt

Janet. The two old people are deaf , and the girls are tired because they have

寫作時(shí)，建議同學(xué)們找出最明顯最有說服力并且能夠進(jìn)行詳細(xì)分析的元素來寫，并且將相同的元素放在一個(gè)段落中進(jìn)行分析。

第六節(jié)　比和比例

Even if in the past we made mistakes, this will only make wiser people out of us and guide us to where we are supposed to be.

公差常用字母r表示。

But when it came time to accept his medal, Ali stood proudly in his blacksuit and red, yellow and black tie, embraced the President and whispered in his ear.

反正我覺得，在我的生活中，以及我的職業(yè)，和英語真是一點(diǎn)關(guān)系都沒有。

因此，把一個(gè)主題句中的主語設(shè)置好，對(duì)于寫出一個(gè)高級(jí)的主題句很重要。

如果這樣開始一篇文章，實(shí)在過于直接，文章的嚼勁就不足了。

A的主語是local customs，不符合。

在造句時(shí), 較高級(jí)詞匯 如能運(yùn)用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個(gè)，也會(huì)使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結(jié)構(gòu)造句 與眾不同

在造句時(shí),既要使句子生動(dòng)，又要使其簡(jiǎn)明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達(dá)方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結(jié)構(gòu)的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀(jì)八十年代發(fā)生過一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數(shù)同學(xué)使用了there be結(jié)構(gòu)，這是對(duì)的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另辟蹊徑而使用了 主語 謂語 賓語 結(jié)構(gòu)，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.

2.使用一些強(qiáng)勢(shì)句式，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強(qiáng)語句的表現(xiàn)力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長(zhǎng)勢(shì)喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3、句式多樣,復(fù)雜得體。在寫作中應(yīng)避免使用相同長(zhǎng)度的相同句型，而應(yīng)注意句式的變化，如長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句與復(fù)合句共用，還可使用簡(jiǎn)化句等;一些較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)如獨(dú)立主格，分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等也可使用。下面的表達(dá)中A句簡(jiǎn)單句多，而且多處使用 there be結(jié)構(gòu)，顯得單調(diào)、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房;臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。

A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇 獨(dú)具匠心

在寫作中，我們可按時(shí)間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)為使主題突出,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，我們應(yīng)注意學(xué)習(xí)和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，NMET2002范文堪稱典范。請(qǐng)看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

　　6.After registering I began to prepare to settle baggage.

在SAT考試中，經(jīng)常也會(huì)考查下列結(jié)構(gòu)的平行。

這是個(gè)鮮明的對(duì)比，表明現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中成功和失敗的兩種不同結(jié)局。

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